I really like your second one with the book. The third one is interesting but not as exciting as the second one (maybe you can have the shirts on the other side of the pool and push the pool a little forward to have space for them, that way you'll have more illustrations shown) The first one is not matching the idea of the bottom 2. I'd suggest you avoid using photos and keep it like the other 2
I like the ideas you came up with,but the angle of the first poster doesn't seem to go with the last two posters. I would also suggest avoiding using the photos.
these are awesome man, I watched you create all the pieces and hunch over your laptop for a week straight! you did good man, I think theres just some minor things like arrangement and size of objects in order to finish this off. I think if you are going to use photos, you gotta use em in all or none at all, cuz its the only image on the poster.
2nd project for Jim is due next Thursday, but aside from that, the posters are looking really good. Awesome illustrations, and great colors. They look good w/o any grunge textures. Good use of gradients
I like the artwork, the message clearly stands out, but the angle seems a little bit too narrow at certain places.
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I really like your second one with the book. The third one is interesting but not as exciting as the second one (maybe you can have the shirts on the other side of the pool and push the pool a little forward to have space for them, that way you'll have more illustrations shown) The first one is not matching the idea of the bottom 2. I'd suggest you avoid using photos and keep it like the other 2
ReplyDeleteI like the ideas you came up with,but the angle of the first poster doesn't seem to go with the last two posters. I would also suggest avoiding using the photos.
ReplyDeleteI like them all they could be unified by added the same colors through your posters
ReplyDeletethese are awesome man, I watched you create all the pieces and hunch over your laptop for a week straight! you did good man, I think theres just some minor things like arrangement and size of objects in order to finish this off. I think if you are going to use photos, you gotta use em in all or none at all, cuz its the only image on the poster.
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2nd project for Jim is due next Thursday, but aside from that, the posters are looking really good. Awesome illustrations, and great colors. They look good w/o any grunge textures. Good use of gradients
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